From 70e5bc49ddaccfe60c967d5f7dc290aa19ba6139 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: UnrealApex <79121360+UnrealApex@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 20 Apr 2021 15:22:10 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Update privacy-policy.html

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 static/privacy-policy.html | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/static/privacy-policy.html b/static/privacy-policy.html
index 978ba133f..25fc563f7 100644
--- a/static/privacy-policy.html
+++ b/static/privacy-policy.html
@@ -67,11 +67,11 @@
       </div>
       <div id="middle">
         <p>
-          This privacy policy will explain how Monkeytype uses the personal data
+          This privacy policy explains how Monkeytype uses the personal data
           we collect from you when you use our website.
         </p>
 
-        <p>Topics:</p>
+        <p>Table of Contents:</p>
         <ul>
           <li>What data do we collect?</li>
           <li>How do we collect your data?</li>
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
         <p>Monkeytype collects your data so that we can:</p>
 
         <ul>
-          <li>View your result history</li>
+          <li>Allow you to view result history of previous tests completed</li>
           <li>Remember your settings</li>
           <li>Display leaderboards</li>
         </ul>
@@ -168,8 +168,7 @@
           sends whenever you visit the website. This data may include internet
           protocol (IP) addresses, browser type, Internet Service Provider
           (ISP), date and time stamp, referring/exit pages, and time spent on
-          each page. This data does not contain information that is personally
-          identifiable. The purpose of the information is for analyzing trends,
+          each page. This data does not contain information that can be used to personally identify someone. The purpose of the information is for analyzing trends,
           administering the site, tracking users' movement on the website, and
           gathering demographic information.
         </p>
@@ -182,7 +181,7 @@
           visit our websites, we may collect information from you automatically
           through cookies or similar technology
         </p>
-        <p>For further information, visit allaboutcookies.org.</p>
+        <p>For further information, visit <a href="https://www.allaboutcookies.org/">allaboutcookies.org</a> or <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HTTP_cookie">wikipedia.org/wiki/HTTP_cookie<a/>.</p>
 
         <h1>How do we use cookies?</h1>
         <p>
@@ -221,9 +220,10 @@
         <h1>Changes to our privacy policy</h1>
         <p>
           Monkeytype keeps its privacy policy under regular review and places
-          any updates on this web page. This privacy policy was last updated on
+          any updates on this web page. Privacy Policy subject to change. This privacy policy was last updated on
           20 January 2021.
         </p>
+        <!-- TODO: add way to see when file was last committed to using the GitHub api-->
 
         <h1>How to contact us</h1>
         <p>
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@
           we hold on you, or you would like to exercise one of your data
           protection rights, please do not hesitate to contact us.
         </p>
-
+        <p>Email: <a href="bartnikjack@gmail.com">bartnikjack@gmail.com</a></p>
         <p>Discord: Miodec#1512</p>
       </div>
     </div>