From 866007bf4caf164df67063ecf3d99f589ace884b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: montydrei <31118844+montydrei@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Wed, 8 Sep 2021 16:50:53 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Cleaned up terms and policy pages (#1825) by montydrei

* Typographical errors; style consistency

* Cleaned up some terminology and grammar/style
---
 static/privacy-policy.html   |  15 ++--
 static/security-policy.html  |  16 ++---
 static/terms-of-service.html | 133 ++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 3 files changed, 83 insertions(+), 81 deletions(-)

diff --git a/static/privacy-policy.html b/static/privacy-policy.html
index 212a7c60d..0af3cd057 100644
--- a/static/privacy-policy.html
+++ b/static/privacy-policy.html
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
           <!-- make sure to update this date every time the policy is changed -->
         </p>
 
-        <p>Effective date: August 27, 2021</p>
+        <p>Effective date: September 8, 2021</p>
         <p>
           Thanks for trusting Monkeytype ('Monkeytype', 'we', 'us', 'our') with
           your personal information, your code, and your projects! We take our
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
           <li>Change settings on the website</li>
         </ul>
 
-        <h1 id="Data_Usage">How do we use your data?</h1>
+        <h1 id="Data_Usage">How will we use your data?</h1>
         <p>Monkeytype collects your data so that we can:</p>
 
         <ul>
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@
         </p>
         <p>In our case, this service is provided by Google Analytics.</p>
 
-        <h1 id="Cookies">What are Cookies?</h1>
+        <h1 id="Cookies">What are cookies?</h1>
         <p>
           Cookies are text files placed on your computer to collect standard
           Internet log information and visitor behavior information. When you
@@ -274,8 +274,7 @@
           For further information, visit
           <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HTTP_cookie" target="_blank">
             www.wikipedia.org/wiki/HTTP_cookie
-          </a>
-          .
+          </a>.
         </p>
 
         <h1 id="Usage_of_Cookies">How do we use cookies?</h1>
@@ -290,12 +289,12 @@
         </ul>
         <h1 id="Types_of_Cookies_Used">What types of cookies do we use?</h1>
         <p>
-          There are a number of different types of cookies, however, our website
+          There are a number of different types of cookies; however, our website
           uses functionality cookies. Monkeytype uses these cookies so we
           recognize you on our website and remember your previously selected
           settings.
         </p>
-        <h1 id="Managing_Cookies">How to manage cookies</h1>
+        <h1 id="Managing_Cookies">How to manage your cookies</h1>
         <p>
           You can set your browser not to accept cookies, and the above website
           tells you how to remove cookies from your browser. However, in a few
@@ -324,7 +323,7 @@
 
         <h1 id="Contact_Info">How to contact us</h1>
         <p>
-          If you have any questions about Monkeytypes’s privacy policy, the data
+          If you have any questions about Monkeytype’s privacy policy, the data
           we hold on you, or you would like to exercise one of your data
           protection rights, please do not hesitate to contact us.
         </p>
diff --git a/static/security-policy.html b/static/security-policy.html
index 9c488a47a..32f4acdbc 100644
--- a/static/security-policy.html
+++ b/static/security-policy.html
@@ -129,19 +129,19 @@
 
         <h1 id="Vulnerability_Disclosure">How to Disclose a Vulnerability</h1>
         <p>
-          For vulnerabilities that impact the confidentiality, integrity and
-          availability of monkeytype services, please send your disclosure via
+          For vulnerabilities that impact the confidentiality, integrity, and
+          availability of Monkeytype services, please send your disclosure via
           (1)
-          <a href="mailto:jack@monkeytype.com">mail</a>
-          , or (2) private discord chat to
-          <a href="https://www.discord.gg/monkeytype">miodec</a>
-          . For non-security related platform bugs, follow the bug submission
+          <a href="mailto:jack@monkeytype.com">email</a>,
+          or (2) private Discord chat to
+          <a href="https://www.discord.gg/monkeytype">Miodec</a>.
+          For non-security related platform bugs, follow the bug submission
           <a
             href="https://github.com/Miodec/monkeytype#bug-report-or-feature-request"
           >
             guidelines
-          </a>
-          .Include as much detail as possible to ensure reproducibility. At a
+          </a>.
+          Include as much detail as possible to ensure reproducibility. At a
           minimum, vulnerability disclosures should include:
         </p>
         <ul>
diff --git a/static/terms-of-service.html b/static/terms-of-service.html
index 9d42a8551..39bcdc472 100644
--- a/static/terms-of-service.html
+++ b/static/terms-of-service.html
@@ -109,33 +109,32 @@
       <div id="middle">
         <!-- make sure to update this date every time the tos is changed -->
         <p>
-          The last updates made to this terms of service were made on August 27,
-          2021
+          These terms of service were last updated on September 8, 2021.
         </p>
         <h1>Agreement</h1>
         <p>
-          By accessing this Website, accessible from monkeytype.com, you are
-          agreeing to be bound by these Website Terms and Conditions of Use and
-          agree that you are responsible for the agreement with any applicable
-          local laws.
+          By accessing this Website, accessible from monkeytype.com, you are 
+          agreeingto be bound by these Website Terms of Service and agree that 
+          you are responsible for the agreement in accordance with any 
+          applicable local laws.
           <strong>
             IF YOU DO NOT AGREE TO ALL THE TERMS AND CONDITIONS OF THIS
-            AGREEMENT, YOU MAY NOT ACCESS OR USE OUR SERVICES.
+            AGREEMENT, YOU ARE NOT PERMITTED TO ACCESS OR USE OUR SERVICES.
           </strong>
         </p>
 
         <h1>Limitations</h1>
         <p>
-          You are responsible for your accounts security and all activities on
+          You are responsible for your account's security and all activities on
           your account. You must not, in the use of this site, violate any
-          applicable laws, including without limitation, copyright laws, or any
-          other laws reguarding the security of your personal data, or otherwise
+          applicable laws, including, without limitation, copyright laws, or any
+          other laws regarding the security of your personal data, or otherwise
           misuse this site.
         </p>
         <p>
           Monkeytype reserves the right to remove or disable any account or any
           other content on this site at any time for any reason, without prior
-          notice to you if we believe that you have violated this agreement.
+          notice to you, if we believe that you have violated this agreement.
         </p>
         <p>
           You agree that you will not upload, post, host, or transmit any
@@ -148,26 +147,26 @@
           <li>is discriminatory or abusive toward any individual or group;</li>
           <li>
             is degrading to others on the basis of gender, race, class,
-            ethnicity, national origin, religion, sexual preference, orientation
-            or identity, disability, or other classification or otherwise
-            represents or approves content that: is hate speech, discriminating,
+            ethnicity, national origin, religion, sexual preference, orientation,
+            or identity, disability, or other classification, or otherwise
+            represents or condones content that: is hate speech, discriminating,
             threatening, or pornographic; incites violence; or contains nudity
             or graphic or gratuitous violence;
           </li>
           <li>
-            is violative to any person's right to privacy or publicity or
+            violates any person's right to privacy or publicity, or
             otherwise solicits, collects, or publishes data, including personal
             information and login information, about other Users without consent
             or for unlawful purposes in violation of any applicable
-            international, federal, state or local law, statute, ordinance or
-            regulation;
+            international, federal, state, or local law, statute, ordinance, or
+            regulation; or
           </li>
           <li>
             contains or installs any active malware or exploits/uses our
             platform for exploit delivery (such as part of a command or control
             system); or infringes on any proprietary right of any party,
             including patent, trademark, trade secret, copyright, right of
-            publicity, or other rights
+            publicity, or other rights.
           </li>
         </ol>
 
@@ -191,34 +190,34 @@
           <li>
             falsely impersonate any person or entity, including any of our
             contributors, misrepresent your identity or the site's purpose, or
-            falsely associate yourself with Monkeytype.;
+            falsely associate yourself with Monkeytype;
           </li>
-          >
           <li>
             violate the privacy of any third party, such as by posting another
             person's personal information without their consent;
           </li>
           <li>
-            access (or attempt to access) any service on the Services by any
-            means other than as permitted in this Agreement or operating the
-            Services on any computers or accounts on which you do not have
+            access or attempt to access any service on the Services by any
+            means other than as permitted in this Agreement, or operating the
+            Services on any computers or accounts which you do not have
             permission to operate;
           </li>
           <li>
             facilitate or encourage any violations of this Agreement or
             interfere with the operation, appearance, security, or functionality
-            of the Services;
+            of the Services; or
           </li>
           <li>
-            use the Services in any manner that is harmful to minors. Without
-            limiting the foregoing, you will not transmit or post any content
-            anywhere on the Services that violate anys laws. Monkeytype
-            absolutely does not tolerate engaging in activity that significantly
-            harms our Users. We will resolve disputes in favor of protecting our
-            Users as a whole.
+            use the Services in any manner that is harmful to minors.
           </li>
         </ol>
-
+        <p>
+          Without limiting the foregoing, you will not transmit or post any 
+          content anywhere on the Services that violates any laws. Monkeytype
+          absolutely does not tolerate engaging in activity that significantly
+          harms our Users. We will resolve disputes in favor of protecting our
+          Users as a whole.
+        </p>
         <h1>Privacy Policy</h1>
         If you use our Services, you must abide by our Privacy Policy. You
         acknowledge that you have read our
@@ -241,15 +240,19 @@
         You shouldn't use bots or access our Services in malicious or
         un-permitted ways. While accessing or using the Services, you may not:
         <ol>
-          <li>use bots, hacks, or cheats while using our site</li>
-          <li>create manual requests to Monkeytype servers</li>
           <li>
-            tamper with, or use non-public areas of the Services, or the
+            use bots, hacks, or cheats while using our site;
+          </li>
+          <li>
+            create manual requests to Monkeytype servers;
+          </li>
+          <li>
+            tamper with or use non-public areas of the Services, or the
             computer or delivery systems of Monkeytype and/or its service
             providers;
           </li>
           <li>
-            Probe, scan, or test any system or network (particularly for
+            probe, scan, or test any system or network (particularly for
             vulnerabilities), or otherwise attempt to breach or circumvent any
             security or authentication measures, or search or attempt to access
             or search the Services by any means (automated or otherwise) other
@@ -261,23 +264,23 @@
             exclusion mechanisms;
           </li>
           <li>
-            Scrape the Services, scrape Content from the Services, or use
+            scrape the Services, scrape Content from the Services, or use
             automated means, including spiders, robots, crawlers, data mining
             tools, or the like to download data from the Services or otherwise
             access the Services;
           </li>
           <li>
-            Employ misleading email or IP addresses, or forged headers or
+            employ misleading email or IP addresses or forged headers or
             otherwise manipulated identifiers in order to disguise the origin of
             any content transmitted to or through the Services;
           </li>
           <li>
-            Use the Services to send altered, deceptive, or false
-            source-identifying information, including without limitation by
+            use the Services to send altered, deceptive, or false
+            source-identifying information, including, without limitation, by
             forging TCP-IP packet headers or e-mail headers; or
           </li>
           <li>
-            Interfere with, or disrupt or attempt to interfere with or disrupt,
+            interfere with, or disrupt or attempt to interfere with or disrupt,
             the access of any User, host, or network, including, without
             limitation, by sending a virus to, spamming, or overloading the
             Services, or by scripted use of the Services in such a manner as to
@@ -286,16 +289,16 @@
         </ol>
         <h1>Links</h1>
         Monkeytype is not responsible for the contents of any linked sites. The
-        use of any linked website is at the user’s own risk.
+        use of any linked website is at the user's own risk.
 
         <h1>Changes</h1>
-        Monkeytype may revise these Terms of Use for its Website at any time
+        Monkeytype may revise these Terms of Service for its Website at any time
         without prior notice. By using this Website, you are agreeing to be
-        bound by the current version of these Terms and Conditions of Use.
+        bound by the current version of these Terms of Service.
         <h1>Disclaimer</h1>
         <p>
-          Excluding the explicitly stated warranties within these Terms, we only
-          offer our Services on an 'as-is' basis. YOUR ACCESS TO AND USE OF THE
+          EXCLUDING THE EXPLICITLY STATED WARRANTIES WITHIN THESE TERMS, WE ONLY
+          OFFER OUR SERVICES ON AN 'AS-IS' BASIS. YOUR ACCESS TO AND USE OF THE
           SERVICES OR ANY CONTENT IS AT YOUR OWN RISK. YOU UNDERSTAND AND AGREE
           THAT THE SERVICES AND CONTENT ARE PROVIDED TO YOU ON AN 'AS IS,' 'WITH
           ALL FAULTS,' AND 'AS AVAILABLE' BASIS. WITHOUT LIMITING THE FOREGOING,
@@ -304,39 +307,39 @@
           WARRANTIES OF MERCHANTABILITY, FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE, OR
           NON-INFRINGEMENT. TO THE EXTENT SUCH DISCLAIMER CONFLICTS WITH
           APPLICABLE LAW, THE SCOPE AND DURATION OF ANY APPLICABLE WARRANTY WILL
-          BE THE MINIMUM PERMITTED UNDER SUCH LAW. MONKEYTYPE makes no
-          representations, warranties, OR GUARANTEES AS TO THE RELIABILITY,
+          BE THE MINIMUM PERMITTED UNDER SUCH LAW. MONKEYTYPE MAKES NO
+          REPRESENTATIONS, WARRANTIES, OR GUARANTEES AS TO THE RELIABILITY,
           TIMELINESS, QUALITY, SUITABILITY, AVAILABILITY, ACCURACY, OR
-          COMPLETENESS of any kind with respect to the Services, including any
-          representation or warranty that the use of the Services will (a) be
-          timely, uninterrupted, or error-free or operate in combination with
-          any other hardware, software, system, or data, (b) meet your
-          requirements or expectations, (c) be free from errors or that defects
-          will be corrected, or (d) be free of viruses or other harmful
-          components. Monkeytype also makes no representations or warranties of
-          any kind with respect to Content; User Content is provided by and is
-          solely the responsibility of the respective User providing that
-          Content. No advice or information, whether oral or written, obtained
-          from Monkeytype or through the Services, will create any warranty not
-          expressly made herein. MONKEYTYPE DOES NOT warrant, endorse,
-          guarantee, or assume responsibility for any user conteNt on the
-          Services or any hyperlinked website or third-party service, and
-          MONKEYTYPE will not be a party to or in any way be responsible for
-          transactions betWeen you and third-parties. IF APPLICABLE LAW DOES NOT
+          COMPLETENESS OF ANY KIND WITH RESPECT TO THE SERVICES, INCLUDING ANY
+          REPRESENTATION OR WARRANTY THAT THE USE OF THE SERVICES WILL (A) BE
+          TIMELY, UNINTERRUPTED, OR ERROR-FREE, OR OPERATE IN COMBINATION WITH
+          ANY OTHER HARDWARE, SOFTWARE, SYSTEM, OR DATA, (B) MEET YOUR
+          REQUIREMENTS OR EXPECTATIONS, (C) BE FREE FROM ERRORS OR THAT DEFECTS
+          WILL BE CORRECTED, OR (D) BE FREE OF VIRUSES OR OTHER HARMFUL
+          COMPONENTS. MONKEYTYPE ALSO MAKES NO REPRESENTATIONS OR WARRANTIES OF
+          ANY KIND WITH RESPECT TO CONTENT; USER CONTENT IS PROVIDED BY AND IS
+          SOLELY THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE RESPECTIVE USER PROVIDING THAT
+          CONTENT. NO ADVICE OR INFORMATION, WHETHER ORAL OR WRITTEN, OBTAINED
+          FROM MONKEYTYPE OR THROUGH THE SERVICES, WILL CREATE ANY WARRANTY NOT
+          EXPRESSLY MADE HEREIN. MONKEYTYPE DOES NOT WARRANT, ENDORSE,
+          GUARANTEE, OR ASSUME RESPONSIBILITY FOR ANY USER CONTENT ON THE
+          SERVICES OR ANY HYPERLINKED WEBSITE OR THIRD-PARTY SERVICE, AND
+          MONKEYTYPE WILL NOT BE A PARTY TO OR IN ANY WAY BE RESPONSIBLE FOR
+          TRANSACTIONS BETWEEN YOU AND THIRD PARTIES. IF APPLICABLE LAW DOES NOT
           ALLOW THE EXCLUSION OF SOME OR ALL OF THE ABOVE IMPLIED OR STATUTORY
           WARRANTIES TO APPLY TO YOU, THE ABOVE EXCLUSIONS WILL APPLY TO YOU TO
           THE FULLEST EXTENT PERMITTED BY APPLICABLE LAW.
         </p>
         <h1>Contact</h1>
         <p>
-          If you have any questions about Monkeytypes’s privacy policy, the data
+          If you have any questions about Monkeytype’s privacy policy, the data
           we hold on you, or you would like to exercise one of your data
           protection rights, please do not hesitate to contact us.
         </p>
         <p>
           Email:
           <a
-            href="mailto: jack@monkeytype.com"
+            href="mailto:jack@monkeytype.com"
             target="_blank"
             rel="noopener noreferrer"
           >